1st Draft of ''The Cure" trailer

As you may realise this isn't my final draft, because I haven't yet added any non-diegetic sounds or muted particular parts within my trailer, in order to create a particular meaning and add conventions of an Indiewood film. Also, I haven't yet added/edited in all final cut express strategies such as dissolve, fade in OR out in between every scene.
Furthermore, it's visible that I filmed my trailer in some areas that I definitely need permission to film in, such as the cemetery and the few restaurants. I asked the care takers of the cemetery if I could shoot my trailer there and they seem not to have any problem with that. Therefore, since I asked for permission I wasn't held back to film within the cemetery and had every right to do so.
Also, at the restaurant we kindly asked the manager if it's okay to film within his premises/property and he was okay with that as long as we didn't film any of the costumers that visited that place at that particular time ( which we did not).